I really like the way that you focus on River and Mal whilst also giving everyone els their moment. I really like your use of Book as a sort of conscience for Mal.
I think you used the song really well it builds to the climax so that there is a nice mix of action and more reflective stuff. The fight sequence was really well done. I think your overlay with River walking through the corpses was really strong.
My favourite little momement was at about 4.30 when the gunshot is followed by Serenity getting hit and going into freefall. I'm a sucker for that sort of thing in vids.
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Date: 2006-06-21 06:03 pm (UTC)I really like the way that you focus on River and Mal whilst also giving everyone els their moment. I really like your use of Book as a sort of conscience for Mal.
I think you used the song really well it builds to the climax so that there is a nice mix of action and more reflective stuff. The fight sequence was really well done. I think your overlay with River walking through the corpses was really strong.
My favourite little momement was at about 4.30 when the gunshot is followed by Serenity getting hit and going into freefall. I'm a sucker for that sort of thing in vids.
I can't wait to see what you come up with next.